No, it has to stop, I can't take it anymore,
Leave me alone, get out of my face, shut the door.
Why...why did you have to do it,
I tried my very best to get you through it.
No, say it isn't true,
I thought you loved me, I loved you.
I told you to stop, I told you to quit,
Someone help me, I'm having a fit.
My eyes are dry, there's not one more tear,
I told you this was my biggest fear.
You just couldn't stop, you just had to continue,
Now all I'm left are pictures, letters, and a memory of you.
Someone help me I can't stop crying,
What is left of my heart is quickly dying.
She's gone now, I just can not accept that,
I'll forever be haunted by this deadly fact.
I cant live without her, she is my life,
I was so close to making her my wife.
She couldn't take it, she pushed it too deep,
I remember the picture, with blood dripping to her feet.
If only I would have got her help sooner,
A month later, my soul still cries murderer.
I can't live here, without seeing my baby,
I have to go, the thought is driving me crazy.
I know that I can not live without her,
So as a result, I push mine even deeper.
now we're together, for eternity in Hell,
This is a story of a dead lovers tale.
If only I would have gotten her help sooner,
A month later my soul still cries murderer.
A contest entry
- Romance, Roses and all kind of other beauty by Entwining Beauty.
300 points, ended February 17, 2007, 6 entries
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No, say it isn't true,
I though you loved me, I loved you.="thought" not though
I told you to stop, I told you to quit,
Someone help me, I'm having a fit.
My eyes are dry, there's not one more tear,
I told you this was my biggest fear.
Someone help me I can't stop crying,
What was left of my heart is quickly dying.=It would speak and read better if you wrote "What is left of my heart is quickly dying,."
I think this piece has potential. I got lost in
the endless rhyme and could not find my way through
the forest.
Thank you for entering Death
lol
love,
liquid
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"Now all I'm left are pictures, letters, and a memory of you."
^^ I loved that line.
"She's gone now, I just can not except that,"
Accept* but sweet
Thank you for taking time to enter my contest!
Good write and very sad.
All my love.
Sophie.
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thanks for entering this great poem good luck
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Interesting, Morbid and don't take this the wrong way but sweet. Thanx for sharing.
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