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Things I Hate About You

I hate when you talk to me and when you make me cry.
Also when you call or when you pass me bye.
I hate when you kiss me and when you say i love you.
I hate when i pass you and when you and smile and laugh.
but most of all i dot hate you not a little bit not even at all.
I love but i hate your ways.

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Written March 6th, 2006

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  • CountCrimsonAvarus
    April 21, 2006
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    Well its diffrent people always will have diffrent way you will just have to learn to understand their ways excellent write

  • Krystyn
    March 13, 2006
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    I love your spin on this poem from 10 things I hate about you! That was a great movie. I do really like your version. Short and sweet and to the point, great write.


  • grannyeri gold member
    March 13, 2006
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    Sentiments expressed well in this short poem. Check line 4, think you have written 'when you' in twice. Line five I do not think you mean dot but do. Keep writing.

  • Availea
    March 10, 2006
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    Nice job. Keep up the great work!
    Love yas,
    Sarah


  • NickN
    March 9, 2006
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    Good job. You left out some words that would have made the poem easier to read, but you got your point across nonetheless. Very good write. Keep it up. Post some more!


  • PassionOfAnAngel
    March 6, 2006
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    wow..great job!!

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