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The Blue Mug


                                 Schoolbus and
                                 minivan
                                 fade into morning.
                                 
                                 Around back,
                                 the kitchen door stands
                                 slightly ajar.
                                 An early morning
                                 rendezvous waits until
                                 after my wife has
                                 left for work.

                                 Rushing to the kitchen,
                                 I bring her to my lips
                                 and she responds,
                                 whispering steamy kisses
                                 of pungent
                                 coffee.



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Written March 6th, 2006

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  • ea silver member
    June 16, 2006
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    very nice. I can't resist a blue mug. Please IM me with name, state, province, whatever you want inluded in the end notes and don't forget a coffee story as per the contest notes... Please leave this poem in the contest until after I have announced the book to ensure my easy access to it and to contacting you with further details. Thank you.


  • SusanL
    March 9, 2006
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    You can be so naughty sometimes. Maybe that is what makes me smile.
    Have a cuppa for me ok?


  • Long Road Home
    March 7, 2006
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    but it does... of the organic variety


  • Cat
    March 6, 2006
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    hell ya!- if only it came with batteries---


  • AJ Morelli gold member
    March 6, 2006
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    Two things I love, short concise poems and coffee. Real nice work and good luck in the contest.


  • rebeka
    March 6, 2006
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    wonderful little write here~ seven little lines and seven deadly sins of flavoured desire!
    i love my cuppa, and i don't even try to disguise the affection from my hubby, lol...great poem

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