What gives you divine right of dominion of natural law.
Who died and made you Lord over creatures great and small.
Brute force is not intelligence, nor even close to smart,
upsetting nature's balance is suicide from the very start.
You can stand and say it's necessary you have family to feed,
but there's other ways besides destroying innocence in greed.
Your ugliness goes much deeper than you'd want to admit,
Satan holds a seat for you deep down in a the belly of hell's pit.
The human creature ugly that wears traumatize animal skins,
displays contempt for his or her own kind and will rue in lament.
The mark of damnation in blood worn upon your vile back,
draws negativity towards you showing just the class you lack.
Condoning a murderer's act is as bad as the commited crime.
needed once food and warmth but no longer needs blind eyes.
Then you wonder why fated karmic justice levels against you,
never recalling your deeds of merciless destruction you do.
Life was never a divine right solely yours to plunder in greed.
The creator sees evil ways and marks every life you've seized.
~~~Suseann~~~
Author notes
www.defenders.org/ If you really care contact your prespective government officials demanding this and other crimes to nature stop.This is a link above to others who do something more than talk about it.
Written March 5th, 2006
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wow, this is quite powerful, but i think it needs to be due to the fact, people are slaughtering these poor animals. absolutly wonder poem. i think you definatly made the point of how selfish and horried the human-kind can be. this was
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suseanne, my dream has always been to see a baby seal dressed in the skin of a human that clubbed one of theirs to death. There is nothing more gruesome and arrogant than human-kind and you illustrated this well. Best wishes in the contest,
xoxoxo
reenie
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Of course, you are right. Sadly, life is hard and those who preach murder are many. Thanks for entering and good luck in the contest.
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It is early morning here and I have stayed up to late, but it was worth it. Thank you so much for this sad write. I enjoyed you skill at penning your thoughts and sharing them here. RC
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Well in upsetting the natural balance of his own habitat,causing catastrophic upevil. He'll have nowhere to survive himself.The ultimite dystroyer,mankind.Unless he awakes soon to his own arrogant folly.
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Sadly, this is all too true. Andy's comment about there only being room for humanity is wrong though. There won't be room for humanity either the way people are breeding. I don't expect the human race to last into the next Century if this continues. I think they will render the planet uninhabitable.
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Andy,there's a link up there under the write.If you're interested.
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Humanity is often uncaring about the life forms who share this planet with us. Quite unfortunate. Soon most of the life forms will be extinct or limited to the zoo. There seems only space for humanity.
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The activist point of view in poetry is not one ive seen until now, and you definitly made it worth the wait. I love the all around feel to the writeing, so intense and also informative. Your topic is well chosen, applause incoming for you, keep up the great writeing and creativity. Thank you so much for the opportunity to read your emotion toward this on paper. -
You might also want to check the organiztions link to animal activist I've posted under the poem.
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Dear rockchic,I'm pointing out the evil of mans arrogance of dominion assumtion over the poor defensless baby seals.They club and strip their skins while still alive.Mother's cry in horror.If strong condemnation of evil bothers you,I'm sorry.But if that's whats needed to get the issue attention.I will!
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This is a good poem with well intentions, but reading this poem a question stayed lodged into my mind:
How can you call these humans evil, and state they're going to hell, when you in turn are just as violently attacking them with your words?
Honestly, you say they are murderers? Well your words didn't seem very peacefull either.
I am not attacking you in turn, I just thought it was quite interesting as I was reading.
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Sweet Sharon,I am one who sees virtue more in the animal kingdom even in it's viciousness of kill for food than the lowliness of human kill and earth destruction of his own habitat.Man envisions himself superior to animal even though his ignorance displays the opposite.~~~Suseann PS,THAT WAS QUITE BEAUTIFUL,YOUR COMMENTS BARE TRUTHS TO BE MOST VALID.
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Brilliance True Gold in Heart & Soul!
Dearest Suseann,
Thank you, your song is strong filled with wisdom and beautifully penned!
I ventured out of body to bring these words to thee..
Place these murderous acts on a page up close and personal.
This is the only way the young will see the rape of Mother Nature for the sake of profit and green greed. Namaste Blessed Be, thank you once again for the divine inspiration you bring everyone always. Your beauty is timeless and your songs need to be heard across the darkness. Penned in crimson caring within a pure love for all of the Lords Creature above and below the sea.
Oh, the tears in the baby seal pups eyes do weep
How can these murderers fall silently to sleep?
In such senseless and brutal deeds
Makes you wonder in winter’s season
Milky ashen tender babies lie
In snows of white, skinned alive
Holy and divine is your song indeed
“There’s other ways besides destroying innocence in greed”
Is this all they can see?
I’ve walked this path and now standing here proud with you in the aftermath
The sportsmen sharpen their clubs and reel in their monies
Babies piled mountain high in their dastardly iniquities
As you sow more of the Lords poetry seeds
It is written and so shall it be
The meek shall inherit the earth
As we sing to Mother Natures Rebirth
Where is the love in their hearts
Can’t they see these tender creatures
Have a right to live and breathe
Just like you and me..
A lone seal, pup wails softly
Please remember me..
I came forth from the sea
We’ve all fallen prey
To the clubs of mankind
Today and yesterday..
Maybe someday in a dreamers dream
Love will find a way to halt the greed.
But for now my beloved friend
We’re dancing in a song that will never end
Through the bright seas there are creatures singing
They seek to help humanity even when we kill them senselessly
Tis a vicious circle a paradox, and the time is ticking on the clock
We leave these shores to our young children in the hopes and prayers
They will do better than we’ve done, as we share our tears everywhere.
Beautifully Penned my new old friend
These words came to me spontaneously for you
I am joyful you took a stand
Your voice is needed across the lands
We all need to sing as one in love and divine insight
Ending the murders in the snows of vanished white.
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Hi dear animals are special they deserve love and
to be respected thats for sure. This was intense
sweetie don't believe I've read anything like this
from you and felt the anger in it wow. Sad for the
animals that die.....Me
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