Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Diary

Dear Diary is what they say. They give me thoughts and brain and tell me there pain.They come and share there thoughts of the day. Sometimes they cry sometimes they laugh.There are days were they cry on my clothing and yell and scream there thoughts as they push the pen on me. I want to cry with them but I cant, cause I am the one who is supposed to comfort them when there are down and need a friend or when there happy and need a laugh. So I am the strong one in this relationship of trust and telling

Author notes


Written March 5th, 2006

What did you think

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • xBrokenxSmilesx
    March 12, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    ohhhh wooooow! I like it, and i know the exact feeling sweetie. My friends and family come to me all the time with their problems, bawling on my shoulder, screaming, hitting, and i just want to cry with them...but i cant -- because like you said, i'm supposed to be the one comforting them. This is so true, you've really done a great job here! keep it up!

    Stephani

  • Just Listen
    March 5, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    ooo
    i like it a lot. the ideas are really cool in it.
    i think it is amazingly beautiful
    love
    thanks for the wonderful comments
    Ginny


  • siqminded
    March 5, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    awesome idea, and a really interesting perspective. i think it could benifit from a different sort of organization, but it doesn't take away from the write.