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I Want You Dead!!!!

You made my childhood a living hell
You told me I'll die if I ever tell

I want you dead for all you have ever done to me
because of you look at what my life has turned out to be

My own mother chose you over her own child
Even though you were the one who made me feel sl*ty and wild

I hate and regret everything you've done to me
But still my own mother was to blind by love to see

I hated to be the one with you when she wasn't around
because I was always raped or beaten to the ground

But never again are you ever going to touch me
because I'm not the under self-esteem kid I used to be

My heart and soul is screaming "I WANT YOU DEAD"
But I'm better than to go with that because I'm using my head

But don't worry...my revenge will soon appear
and I'll be that someone you'll hate to come near

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Written March 5th, 2006

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  • mushroom king
    March 9, 2006
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    I feel ya baby


  • DarkFire-J
    March 5, 2006
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    love it baby
    good job

  • OneAndOnlyRay
    March 5, 2006
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    Thank you and I just edited it because I had a few mistakes and stuff!!


  • lips of deceit
    March 5, 2006
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    good

    this is sad
    i can see that you want revenge
    my friend got malested by her step dad and her mom dont belive her
    so its good cuz i know how this feels
    well from my friends point of few
    good job tho