Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

A Miscommunication

If you asked me for one word to describe how i feel, I'd say Forever.
Because forever if what i would give.
Your worth every second of my breath.

If you asked me for another, I'd say Together.
Because that is what i want for us to be.
So we can show the world to see.

If you asked me for one last word, I'd say Eternity.
Becakse that is what i owe you.
For spending three seconds with me.

I tell you these three words: Forever, Together, and Eternity.
Because that is what i want.
But you don't understand that message is for you.

Author notes


Written March 5th, 2006

What did you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • AngelinBlack
    March 15, 2006
    Edit | Reply
    This is exactly how I feel right now. I hope that everything works out with whoever this poem is about, because I know I can't wish the same for myself. Keep up the good work! Please comment back!