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Incomplete Forgiveness; Beautiful Blessings

An acrostic:  Incomplete Forgiveness; Beautiful Blessings

 

     Incomplete forgiveness,
     Now what could that mean?
     Could there really be such a thing?
     Our Father, in the Bible, teaches
     Mercy, forgiveness, grace and love
     Presented clearly through Christ, our Lord.
     Lost; we’re burdened down with sin
     Eternal sacrifice; only Christ can cleanse.
     To those who seek, they will surely find
     Everlasting life and beautiful blessings!

     Forgiveness, you see, has to be complete
     Only through Jesus and not through works;
     Requirement fulfilled only through faith
     Giving up our own wicked righteousness.
     Indeed, if we follow the law to a ‘T’
     Victorious in works, rich in nothing
     Ever depending on what we have done
     Never seeing that Christ is sufficient
     Empty we are and at death we will
     Sleep in incomplete forgiveness
     Severed from Him for eternity.

     Beseech now the Lord, put aside
     Empty works of the law, evil arrogance
     And bow before the Lord totally exposed
     Utterly naked, without works, undone.
     Trust in Him only and His righteousness
     Include nothing of yourself or what you‘ve done,
     For we are filthy rags standing before God.
     Utilize His grace, for by it must we be saved,
     Loose all your righteous works, they are filthy rags.

     Bow before the Lord, blessings will be found,
     Love will be given, grace and mercy too.
     Every one of us who, without deadly works
     Seeks by truth the Lords treasured gifts
     Shall forever more rest safely in Him
     Inheriting salvation, by faith, not by works.
     Never trust in self before God; remember
     Gaining complete God forgiveness will
     Send forth beautiful, enormous blessings!

Author notes

I chose 4 words... forgiveness, incomplete, blessings, beautiful.

I try to include scirpture any time I write poems about the bible so here they are...

Isaiah 64: 6-7  But we are all as an unclean ting, and all our righteousnesses are as filthy rags; and we all do fade as a leaf; and our iniquities, like the wind, have taken us away.  And there is none that calleth upon thy name, that stirreth up himself to take hold of thee: for thou hast hid thy face from us, and hast consumed us, because of our iniquities.  

In the acrostic, when I mention works, I am referring to the 'law' in which God gave in Exodus.  In the Old Testament, the law was given to reveal sin and the sacrifice for the broken law was the blood sacrifice of a perfect lamb.  In the New testament, Jesus fulfilled the requirements of the law...

1 Peter 1: 18-21 Forasmuch as ye know that ye were not redeemed with corruptible things as silver and gold, from your vain conversation received by tradition from your fathers; But with the precious blood of Christ as of a lamb without blemish and without spot:  Who verily was foreordained before the foundation of the world, but was manifest in these last times for you, who by him do believe in God, that raised him up from the dead, and gave him glory; that your faith and hope might be in God.

Galatians 6:18 BUT IF YE BE LED OF THE SPIRIT, YE ARE NOT UNDER THE LAW.

Romans 10:9-13  That if thou shalt confess with thy mouth the Lord Jesus, and shalt believe in thine heart that God hath raised him from the dead, thou shalt be saved.  For with the heart man believeth unto righteousness; and with the mouth confession is made unto salvation.  For the scripture saith, whosoever believeth on him shall not be ashamed.  For there is no difference between the Jew and the Greek: for the same Lord over all is rich unto all that call upon him.  For whosoever shall call upon the name of the Lord shall be saved.


Written March 5th, 2006

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  • Ellis gold member
    March 7, 2006
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    OK

    I don't go much for Acrostics, and this one doesn't rhyme. This iis just me, of course. I'm glad you kept them straight: no partial forgiveness! --Ellis

  • Samplette gold member
    March 7, 2006
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    This is truly beautiful. A marvelously written acrostic. Very nicley done. Best wishes in the contest.
    Sam

  • TheM0of silver member
    March 6, 2006
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    I see someone else has seen your writing change for the better, as in improvement and maturity. They're noticing what I have also seen recently.

    Also someone mentioned that you wrote the same thing about God as many others. Probably because it's the same God? I would say so. That can be a good thing, since what you wrote here to be Biblically accurate. So others are seeing the same God.

    That's a good thing!

    A masterful write, once again. If I had points I'd applaud. Oh, well, maybe I'll come back.

    One thing I noticed: the blue against this background seems to make it difficult to read. Maybe yellow?

    And you made a common error many make, myself included: you wrote "Loose all your righteous works, they are filthy rags."
    The word to use is spelled "Lose";


  • ian sawicki silver member
    March 6, 2006
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    your work has changed so much from what i remember of it a few years ago all for the good i may add. this is a beautiful piece.
  • Molassis
    March 6, 2006
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    Rockchik000 thank you for coming back and commenting again. I do want you to know though that you didn't hurt my feelings... it's ok when people do not agree with my poems, I understand that not everyone shares my beliefs and I know that not every one will like my poems... and that's really ok with me. I don't get my feelings hurt very easily anymore! Thanks for both the comments though, they are appreciated!

    ~Melissa

  • rockchik000
    March 6, 2006
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    I would like to add that I did not realize what an acrostic poem was, and after reading the contest I have to give you more props where they are deserved.
    This had to have been a lot harder than just simply writing a spiritual poem, especailly with choosing 4 words.
    I apologize for my hasty conclusion.

  • Frogzter
    March 5, 2006
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    This is truly outstanding Molassis! I love it and thanks for sharing this with us. My best to you in the contest. Will be back with more at judging!
    Blessings and hugz
    ~Frog

  • Frozentearz gold member
    March 5, 2006
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    First of all I want to thank you for the effort and time
    that you put into this
    Unbelievable work with four words,
    Bravo Bravo
    Im sure all that share in your faith of lord
    Will applaud this work...
    Thank you for sharing
    FrozenTears

  • Viyanna Rosemarie
    March 5, 2006
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    Bow before the Lord, blessings will be found,
    Love will be given, grace and mercy too.

    i really like the ever so true message that you give here. viyanna r langager

  • rockchik000
    March 5, 2006
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    Over all it was a decent poem, but to me it seemed like all the rest. It was good, but not unique. It said the same things that most poems about God do aswell.

    Just a heads up:
    The last line of the 1st & 3rd paragraph seem forced, and the background and font don’t work together
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