I'm a junkie
Of the Torn City kind
I love waking up
And committing a crime.
In Torn City i'm married
And head of my faction
I live for the game
I love the tense action.
We commit bomb threats
And often succeed
To fill up my happy bar
I often smoke weed.
I have lots of friends
And they all watch my back
They'll war if I need them
For me they'll attack.
I'm a Torn City junkie
That i'll confess
Someday i'll be great too
I won't settle for less.
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Written March 5th, 2006
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Uhhhh, Alicia? They're supposed to be capitalized whenever you talk about yourself. So, you need to capitalize the other two I's in the last stanza. Just FYI. Great poem, and I'm glad you like the game!
~Robert
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I only capitalize them if they are supposed to be
I took your other advice though...thanks
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Great piece. I noticed that you haven't capitalized your I's in the last stanza.
I also think that in stanza 4 line 3 you could probably add "to" on the end of the line because it would finish the line.
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