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I Can

I can see
see the pain in your eyes,

I can feel
feel the pain in your soul,

I can see you
see you through your lies,

I can hear
hear you screaming because of the pain,

I can see, feel, and hear you
but can you hear, feel, and see me,

Can you see
see how much I Love You,

Can you feel
feel my soul pounding for you,

Can you hear
hear me screaming your name,

As I ask you this question
this question that is eating me alive,

I want you to look
look deep inside for the answer,

And think
think about how you are the one who keeps me alive,

Now here is my question
Do you Love Me like I Love You?

But don't answer me
because not only am I scared of your answer I'm scared that you will answer without looking inside your heart,

All that I can do is get closer to you
and wait for the right time to tell you...

How Much I Truly Love You!!

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Written March 5th, 2006

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  • Realistic Nightmare
    March 5, 2006
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    Awww..Thanks Jessie...Thats awesome..Can't wait to meet ya..Your FRIGGIN AWESOME!~!~!
    Love
    Hill~


  • JunoAlusLyn
    March 5, 2006
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    LOOOOOOVED IT

    AWwwww swwweeeeeet. I love it I especaly like this part.
    "because not only am I scared of your answer I'm scared that you will answer without looking inside your heart"
    I have feelt like this before so it really... I don't know. I can't describe feeling with words. I just dosent work.