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Dear Heart

Dear Heart, why do you pound so fast
Is it because of the guy I'm with and wanting it to last

Is it because around him I feel a sense of pleasure
Something that no other guy can measure

Dear Heart, I'm still wondering why I feel this way
Is it because this is a feeling I want to stay

Is it because he is so true to me
Or is it because I have never meet anyone like, he

Dear Heart, tell me why when he's around your acting this way
Is this your way of telling me something you want to say

Is it love that I sense and it's reacting on me and you
If that is so then I think it is true

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Written March 4th, 2006

A contest entry

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  • BareBeast
    March 5, 2006
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    awesome poe. very sweet and flowed beautifully. thank you for sharing!

  • OneAndOnlyRay
    March 5, 2006
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    Thank you and love you too!!


  • DarkFire-J
    March 5, 2006
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    Raven
    I love you so much. you just don't know how good i feel for having someone thats so perfect to me!!
    love you raven

  • OneAndOnlyRay
    March 4, 2006
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    THANKS SOO MUCH!!!!

  • Gogetalife
    March 4, 2006
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    Very nice entry to the contest, very passionate love poem, you did good job with this one my friend. good luck
    AJ

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