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unlike

i'll synchronise my heartbeat;
my thoughts,
with the singing clock

fall into blinded feeling
unlike
you, unlike them, too.

i shall live through - and over -
our lives -
vying with the clouds

Author notes

mmm funny peculiar punctuation
Written March 4th, 2006

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