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A Word Of Comfort

Comment 'I think this is a wonderful poem. Strong feeling and strong words only someone that is or has lived it would understand these feelings. I for one nows how it feels...Living through it and feeling lost like a puzzle that I could be in to get out. Just by realizing it is the most of the great feels that we would have right.  Love the poem just a God sent from heaven to hear me out. This poem show me that what ever we act on, God will always be there to hear our ever thoughts. If you just wait and see for a little sign that will show you that He is listening. I think you should start by placing a prayer and believe that you will do just fine by talking to your mother about this poem.
***First thing before letting here read the poem, tell her that you want to come to her like a friend not your mother, to talk  . Just one thing to let her know that you are feeling a little fun in talking to her. Also let her know what you are about to tell would make her feel some what painful to hear. tell her "Mom I want to talk to you about how I feel about things in life in my life... See what she says. Then tell her you want to show her how you feel through this poem. This show you how I feel mom. I think that would work for me to say to my mom. **** Inside you is a sweet person and don't let no else tell you any different.  GOD BLESS ALWAYS!! Wonderful  poem   ' added successfully

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This is a comment I gave to someone asking for help on a poem she wanted to show her mother. This poem says dip feelings about her life and how she feels about it. This is what I comment to her.
Written March 4th, 2006

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  • hypnotice
    March 4, 2006
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    i think that you do good comments are a very good writer. your poems are all gospel but they all ahve a meaning to them and can benefit society in a way. i really like your style of writing but try switching it up..think about it