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Not so much without

Let me hear you say it again.
Ego boosting stroking words to make me feel better.
"The beauty of you is inside."

There, inside, the heart, the soul, et cetera.
Honey, forgive me a bitter laugh.
Everyone knows that's a kind way to say...

Pretty in, not so much without.

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Written March 4th, 2006

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  • shivher
    March 4, 2006
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    that is SO exactly my point. Thanks for understanding.

    Also, thanks for the comment.

  • shivher
    March 4, 2006
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    Yes, when someone is gorgeous, if they are ugly on the inside it tends to overwhelm the beauty on the outside.

    Thanks for the comment.

  • Kryer
    March 4, 2006
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    Ahhh...I feel ya honey. It's the same for many people out there. If your not society's ideal then you start out at the bottom. You have to prove yourself to everyone. I hate the fact that if your a beauty then it's automatically assumed that your a good person, etc...and those who don't fit the standard are already labeled a "freak" even though we are all the same on the inside. It's so disturbing. Just know that your not the only one. Great touching poem.


  • VoicesInMyHead
    March 4, 2006
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    beauty can be within. If a guy is hot but is a dick. I will think he's the ugliest thing in the world because of his personality. Personality to me over-rules everything else about a person. I may not think someone is that good looking but if they have an awesome personality they become so much more attractive to me.