Notable efforts are made for her now
Each envy, I quote, " An adorable bliss"
Vacates me a sentence, "as simply just Wow!
Etched fruitful in morale's to call her all this;
Remember her once, it will last us forever
Our treasure to trove, with the richness of youth
Not once to forget, or to image the sever
Tomorrow, thereafter, her bond is the truth
Impossible dreams are ones I'm content
My only mirage, when I'm never on time
Each dream in caress, is of her, the sublime!
Author notes
To a very nice person indeed! Enjoy!
Written March 3rd, 2006
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This is very sweet, and loving. I've heard nothing but good things of you, so I had to come check out your work. This caught my eye because neverontime is my sis in law!! It is such a beautiful poem, worded very well, and I know she treasures it! Great write.
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Neverontime is indeed a dear..and you have created a lovely work of poetry in her honor. Thank you for sharing this wonderful write with us.
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thsi is a sweet and strong poem though it is short, it still hits you with the force of the greatest emotion, keep it flowing
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How sweet this is! Thank you for sharing!
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Very touching words and beautifully written.
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Just........WOW! This brought tears of joy to my eyes! Thank you.
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A True Masterpiece!
YAYYYYYY!!!!!! A beautiful, magnificent poem, for me???!!! No one has ever written a poem for me, Tony!!!!! Thank you for this!!!! Such beautiful, eloquent, magnificent, heartfelt, magical words, straight from the pen of a master poet!!!!! And such wonderful imagery! I absolutely LOVE this! I will treasure this one always. You are a wonderful friend, and I thank you from the very depths of my heart! A dozen roses for you, my friend! Thanks! 
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