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Beloved Hypocrite

You made me promise:
I’d never leave you
Never cheat on you
Always love you
Never lie
Be yours
Forever

I promised
I swore on my life
That these things I’d keep true

Thus if I promised them
So did you
Right?

But you are but a lousy hypocrite

Never leave me?
You left me long ago
Broke my heart
Abandoned this lonely soul
I needed you
But you were no where to be found

Never cheat on me?
Then  who is she?
That angel sitting next to you
Sharing your kisses
Basking in your love
Taking my place

Always love me?
You stopped
I no longer hear the words
I cannot sense your devotion
You no longer have emotions towards me
I’m just on the side now

Never lie?
Right…
You told me you loved me
Lie number one
You said that we did not break up
I was your girl still
Lie number two
Everything you ever said
All those promises…
LIES!!
Lies three through a million

Be mine forever?
Hate to tell you  this but…
You can’t be mine and hers
Choose one
Pick a favorite
Pick a lover for eternity

You chose her
Obviously
She’s so great….

I will never be yours again
Now that you broke your promises
Mine are no longer valid
I am no longer under your spell
No longer am I a victim of your lies

Filthy hypocrite
I despise you

Author notes

Wrote for my baby Rahul... the same one I wrote "wow" for... You'll see these real emotions in the poem... hatred but utter devotion... yep, that's me.
Written March 3rd, 2006

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  • Guilty By Design
    March 3, 2006
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    lol yeah i hope pouring hem out helped


  • ScentOfCinnamon
    March 3, 2006
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    Thank you... This is all so weird... I try not to write about my emotions but... wow... Yeah this all just flowed out of me... Bottled emotions come out well, huh?

  • Guilty By Design
    March 3, 2006
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    Wow such powerful emotions in this. It's very well written and sad at the same time for so many have to feel this way. The ending is a nice touch