The snow plow leaves,
a job is well done.
-the evening star shines.
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Written March 3rd, 2006
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The snowplows will be back soon now won't they?!
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great
snowplows are a very needed item in many parts of the world(mine included!), and you sweet poem did a winters evening justice. -
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DogFish, Nice write, good imagery with a effective third line transistion. The picture also compliments your words. Good Stuff
Dennis :^) -
I like the snow plow. Well, sometimes I do, sometimes I don't. But for some reason, I love being awoken by one. In the morning. Really early. With this big soothe of a rumbling. Hmmm. Sounds like my stomach. Yer. Anyway. Really good poem for such a topic. I'm impressed.
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Thanks for your encouragement, the painting is by Renate Heidersdorf. Feel free to look at more of the artwok at heidersdorf.com
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Thanks for commenting on my poem, yes it is a nice drawing isn't it? I kinda felt like I was puting a mink coat on a mangy dog when I added it to my little poem. It does add a lot. It comes from heidersdorf.com if you are interested in seeing more
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this is purdy
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I like the words used in this one. The picture does go great with this work too.
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good write ... creates good imagery ... good flow of words
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ahhh gary! its emilie
w0ow nice work..!
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good write
the artwork supports this haiku beautifully.i just cannot stop looking at it. nice one looking to read some more. thank you
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