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I'm Sorry

My heart
My sisters, my friends

My sisters are my best friends,
it hurts when they are not there.
Where did they go?
I feel so alone
Something in my life is missing
My sisters

Things they say, saddens me
I’m not as tough as they think
Some things make me cry
Why? Where are my sisters?
I don’t know where to go
Or what to do without them

They have put a hole in my heart
and they don’t even know it
But how could they know?
There not here

I hold my sisters above me
and in my heart
Every day they are in my thoughts
And my prayers
And that keeps me strong
But I still miss their love
And friendship
I want us to grow old together
With grey hair and wrinkles

But they don’t see
what they’re doing to me
Staying away
Missing them
Missing me
What have I done?
I just don’t understand
I wish I knew,
so I could try and fix it

The worst of all-
They live near me
I can’t even visit them
I’m not aloud
I’m not welcome

How long do they need
this break from me?
And why did they even need a break
From their little sissy
I would do anything for them
Any time, any day
What ever they need
I’ll be there

I need them now
Where are they?

I’m sorry…

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Written March 3rd, 2006

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  • Gabby Sabby
    July 27, 2008

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    Aww baby sister. I'm right here I will never leave you... You are always welcome in my home and on the phone when ever you need me... I love you... Carrie Sue...


  • Sunshine1
    January 20, 2008

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    I love it

    I really love this poem,and I am very sorry that you must feel this way,and i agree with everyone elses comments to, life does make us stronger, and we do need to go through some things on our own, and you will find in time that all of the paths you fallow,eventually you will end up on the one right back
    into your sisters arms,and that is when you will realize that they were there the whole time waiting for you. love you cuz! very nice poem, it brought tears to my eyes,it made me think back to simalar feelings i used to have, abouts my own sisters.
    sunshine1


  • Dark-Princess
    October 15, 2006
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    I have often felt this way.But, no matter what we do to one another, we are family.I think times like this will not last forever and we are stronger for having gone through them.So, hold your head up and dry your eyes and soon you will see them right by your side.I love ya girl...
    Dark-Princess


  • Huntress silver member
    March 6, 2006
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    We all walk our own paths, i am sorry you are feeling this way but sometimes we just need a little break from our families. I know from my own experience that sometimes the best way to show my love is to walk away. I know that sounds harsh but we have to find our own truth in life. No one can do it for us.


  • FifthDove
    March 3, 2006
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    Aweeeee, Tawn, I feel so bad for you feeling this way.
    Your poem has brought tears to me. I know your sisters
    are here for you, you just need ask for them.
    *love# love ya kiddo...


  • sunshineNjanuary
    March 3, 2006
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    Beautiful poem sissy, Im right here i've never left you. and i never will. Life is not allways, the way we want it to be. But it is the way we make it. Life long trial's that we have all walked, it was just your turn, sometimes we must walk them alone, but dont ever forget, through it all my heart is still right here and it allways will be. i love you, my little sis... Im just waiting for you too....carrie sue..

  • Trinka
    March 3, 2006
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    Thanks Angel for reading my poem..Tawn

  • zeshan
    March 3, 2006
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    very long but very nice poem .... don't be sad preety,it is life and u have to live it in any condition.......be happy and keep writing great poems.....LOVE , TAHIRA.

  • Angelbabie
    March 3, 2006
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    This poem is very sad,Im sorry to here about your trouble with your sisters right now mom told me to tell you there your sister and eventually they will realize your there baby sister and that they cant keep going on without you!
    Angelbabie
    Edited on Mar 03, 6:27 p.m. because ''.

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