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A sister like you, are few

A sister to you, she always knew
A sister to me, you will always be
A sister that’s always true,
through old and new
A sister who’s there to care
A sister who lives and gives and gives
A sister that’s strong and keeps going on
A sister through pain and everything
A sister with tears and fears
A sister who shares her pain and shame
A sister like you, are few-
A sister like you Carrie
You make me happy

Because you are special to me,
you see
I carry you with me
in my heart
You’re like a portrait of art
It does not matter if we’re near or far
You will always be my sister
You are always true through old and new
There to care,
who lives and gives your all
Strong enough to carry my pain
With no gain
To wipe my tears and ease my fears
And to share your pain…
What can I say
You make me merry Carrie
You need to know
you are dear to me
You’re always in my heart
Even when we
grow apart
A sister who’s always been true
Carrie I love you
A sister like you, are few
Now you know
I’ll always love you

Author notes

I didn’t write this poem for strangers to critique
I wrote it straight from my heart to my sister Carrie

Written March 3rd, 2006

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  • Gabby Sabby
    July 27, 2008

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    Aww Tawnya thank you..Im cying happy tears, right now I love you.....now and forever..Love ya Carrie Sue...


  • Huntress silver member
    March 6, 2006
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    She loves you too, know it and believe it.


  • FifthDove
    March 3, 2006
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    Tawn this is a beautifully heartfelt poem you have written for Carrie. I'll bet she'll love it. As I do! Keep up the writting, it's nice to see you posting again. Love Ya

  • Angelbabie
    March 3, 2006
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    This poem is really sad Im sure carrie would love it Angelbabie
    Edited on Mar 03, 6:29 p.m. because ''.