
Lauretta's Grandpa is having a birthday,
and I want to join the celebration.
I can only imagine the wonderful feeling,
the extent of your prideful elation.
Sweet little angel to hold in your arms,
must be the best gift to have this year.
Just thinking about the lump in your throat,
brings to me a stinging kind of tear.
Congratulations on your milestone,
and may you be blessed with many more.
Spoil your sweetie with all your love,
that's what grandpa's are for.
HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!
Author notes
Happy Birthday
Written March 3rd, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- Say Happy Birthday To My Dad by Mickie27.
320 points, ended March 16, 2006, 2 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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How true, Gandpas and Grandmas are for spoiling their darlings. Nice write.
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you see,that's what i mean when i say angel.this grandpa will remember this piece for you,from your heart,defined him so very well.he will ve smiling from ear to ear after reading this.you are a sweetheart.
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I bet this will be one of Lauretta's grandpa's best birthdays ever. No doubt he will love this poem of well wishes-I'vew always felt like you could publish your birthday poems into popular birthday cards and then I could illustrate them for you. I think I've made that proposition to you before and I'm still waiting....waiting...fading...fa.... (I just know you can make us both rich, yeha!!!)
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This is so beautiful Sam. I just love it. It has that sentimental touch that brings a tear to the eye.
Good Luck in this contest.
Jan -
wisdom and little ones
lovely write, a gandpa story,with love , tears and joy..
to look a new life with wonder,
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Darling Sam, a wonderful Birthday wish you have written.
I never had a grandpa and I feel I've missed out on some wonderful experiences. My Mum and my Dad both lost their Father's when they were both aged fourteen.
Love you ny
Joan
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Ah wow Samplette this is lovely thanks so much for entering this contest. I really enjoyed this poem it was light hearted and fun thanks.
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