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Smoke

Drifts away in to a new world
Getting lighter and
Venturing forth
Getting larger
Rises slowly
Smoke

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Venturing forth
Getting larger
Written March 3rd, 2006

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  • FirelitMoonshine
    July 11, 2007
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    not praising my own poem

    when you read this, in case you didn't see before read it from both the top downwards and the bottom up.