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reasons

I'm looking,
and thinking,
trying to think of a reason,
for me to live on,
have i carried out my life?
i cant find reason,
trying to find somthing,
something to give me a reason,
to carry on,
what if there isn't,
no reason,
no future,
what should i do,
ill just sit here,
looking at my blood,
thinking a for a reason,
to wipe it up,
but there is none,
no more reasons too carry on,
no more reasons to help others,
i have done my job,
well from what i can tell,
i have done everything,
that i was meant to,
but i am still looking,
for something,
anything,
just one reason to live,
but no there is nothing,
nothing,
no reason for me to carry on,
no one needs me,
no one wants me,
so whats the point of this existence,
if there is no reason for me to be.

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Written March 3rd, 2006

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  • stevens5613
    March 16, 2006
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    thnx lol mwahxx


  • shadowed lips
    March 16, 2006
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    wow i love dis poem ur so gd!!! luv ya mwah x


  • HeartlessAddiction
    March 3, 2006
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    Meep of course people want you...you know that. And you do have reasons to live, live for your mates, your family, your friends...

  • Ir.muse
    March 3, 2006
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    oh...no...no..no...sure you have lots of reasons to live for.You're just ignoring them.I'm sure.Just take a look around yourself and you'll see lots of reasons to live for.
    Shahrzad

  • stevens5613
    March 3, 2006
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    thnx espeacially for the proper advice and i do see what u have said ihave overdone it here thnku and i dnt mind thts y i put my poems on here so tht ppl can tell me what they think thnku


  • Forever-Damned
    March 3, 2006
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    This is really good! I love it! And I feel the same way most of the time! Why be here! One thing sorta took away from the poem though. I know that it's called 'reasons' but I think you used that word too many times in this piece. Sometimes you can overdo it simpy by putting a word too many times in, and I'm afraid thats what I think you've done. Im sorry about that! I just had to tell you. Please forgive me.. For it is only my opinion! It really was an excellent piece though!

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