I'm walking out,
as you walk in,
your presence causes,
Ant-crawl Skin.
Just a smile,
a knowing grin,
a look that causes,
Ant-crawl Skin.
A turn of phrase,
to cause chagrin,
your words create my,
Ant-crawl Skin.
I want to run,
when you begin,
you'll always be my,
Ant-crawl Skin.
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Written March 3rd, 2006
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A contest entry
- Be Free! by Illiterate Iguana.
300 points, ended March 22, 2006, 86 entries
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I think that the words Ant-crawl skin is the best part of this poem because all the other words and descriptions that you use are not in depth enough they do not enable the reader to full understand what is happening other than the fact that he/ she makes your skin crawl. I assume in a positive way I have assumed this because the rhythm of the poem seem merry and skipping.
Illiterate Iguana
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this is really good!
very creative and i love the mataphore of 'ant-crawl skin' it's very creative.
this was an excellent write! thanks for sharing and featuring
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