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Your Night

Your dark night was evil.
The black enveloped me as I
was shoved through the door,
and the light retreated.

The moon was low in the sky,
almost as if at half mast.
An ominous onlooker,
it refused to illuminate my footsteps.

The gang of trees moaned and creaked.
Tricksters: they hid the secrets of your nether.
Loud and ambiguous bangs, thumps, and rustlings
began to vex my spirit and hurried step.

My eyes were glass,
and they shattered!
I became aware of the
sounds as my time ran out.

I could not find peace.
I hid my head and bowed down in
fear as I I cried out, and my hair fought to stand still
against the relentless black gale.

Your dark night was evil.

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Written March 2nd, 2006

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  • chanterai
    March 2, 2006
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    Sweetness!!

    Orbit Gum
    Is better than rum.
    I like to play drums.
    Orbit Gum

    lol I really liked this. It had lots of wonderful, dark imagery that just made the piece! Yayzal00ne! =)