Pulling and pushing
Tears flowing down her face
Cuts and Bruises
A constant reminder of the past
Every day she struggles
Every day she bleeds
Every day she wonders
Why me?
Her mother doesn't love her
She really couldn't care less
Abandoning her kids
Is what she does best
In the middle of the night
A young woman cries
All she really wants
Is her mothers loving touch
She has just put her kids
Through something most will never experience
How they are holding up
Is a constant mystery
But she will never give up
Even if the scars keep coming
She will never give in
Like her selfish mother did
Author notes
Constructive Critisism Welcome! umm, dont know what to say about this. Tells the story of my life lately.
Written March 2nd, 2006
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Poetric
this is a beautiful poem, emotions are well shown..
keep it up, it's very good..
it compares with other peoples experiences, and i think you've grasped that concept, beautiful.
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Thank you so much for your comment on my poem. The words that you spoke mean alot to me. Again, thank you for the applause and comment
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This poem is so touching. It flows so beautifully through these sad words. These words that you have used in this honest and emotional poem have captured my soul and affected me deeply. I thank you for sharing this personal poem. I send you my applause as well as a huge hug filled with compassion and understanding.
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oh sweetie!!!! You know that this is how i feel a lot of the time. You know how my mom is, and well - i feel sorry that you have to be going through such a thing. That's terrible, but you know you always have Nick, his mom, your other family members, and you've ALWAYS got me hunny. I hope you know this. ~ I will try to help you through anything you need, i love you very much and there's nothin you can do about that
-A sister's love comin your way always- -
hey great write to tell the story of your life keep it up
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