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Acrostic *OneAndOnlyRay*

Acrostic OneAndOnlyRay

OneAndOnlyRay is a Pixie daughter of DarkChildsKiss who came a long way
Now of you have found each other since she was once Foreverlovingjay.
Each has survived the pain and fear that life brings to bear
And you embraced your pain turning it into gain and purest tears.
Now your mirrors are the eyes of Pixie mum and Cherub Sprite
Dare see into each others soul for what is true and right.
Oh do not turn from the glare of all the pain there.
Nothing prepares you for surrendering it or being alone hurt or bare.
Love is the thing you need to give and also to receive
Yet you never know how its may go or it is perceived.
Rise I call your name again reflecting in a pool of sight
And join the Court of Nevermore standing to your Pixie Queen's right.
Yes, you are beloved in full by all us Pixies so bright.

by Iohagh

 



Janet McCall

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Ms. Pixielicious number 111, we salute you everyone and if you find yourself lost for words listen to the thundering swarm of Pixies heard.
Written March 2nd, 2006

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  • OneAndOnlyRay
    March 2, 2006
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    I love this alot!!! Thank you soo much!!!!
    Edited on Mar 02, 5:28 p.m. because ''.


  • Prince Charming
    March 2, 2006
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    Yep i surrender your a acrosticolic. Hey that does not hurt would it? That pixieland must be a fine place to be. Well since my becoming wife lives there I will visit it one day i guess. Hopefully i wont get lost That happens sometimes you know. I have to wait till the night falls and the stars bring me home. Herman


  • Iohagh
    March 2, 2006
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    Oneandonlyray just asked me what did I mean by an acrostic transport spell. Look at the Sherlock Gnome,Pixie Detective, Faerie Good Investigation series on the Pixieland boards and you'll figure it out if you reads only one tome. Wish you and your adopted Pixie family the the best in Pixieland. I love DarkChildsKiss as one of my very bestest cousins and DarkChildsKiss is a great queen too. Smoosh before I whoosh.


  • DarkChildsKiss silver member
    March 2, 2006
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    You are too good cuzzy! She will truly love this! Great write! I applaud you for it!
    Edited on Mar 02, 5:01 p.m. because ''.

  • Iohagh
    March 2, 2006
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    Pixie Banshee Court

    This is what I meant by that. It is your acrostic and your name is on it if you don't like it. You can change it and also get comments on it.

    Acrostic Oneandonlyray
    by Iohagh on Mar 02

    allpoetry.com/poem/1854939
    Edited on Mar 02, 5:06 p.m. because ''.

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