I ride upon each shooting star,
and can dance across the Milky Way.
The Lord needed one more angel,
so he called for me that day.
Reborn into Heaven,
forever young and free.
So I ask you, my dear, sweet friends,
to not weep for me.
For I see no more sadness,
just peace and hope and love,
and I pray that you remember me,
as I watch you from above.
So I send this thought to you,
allow your hearts to mend,
and know you've gained a guardian angel,
you haven't lost a friend.
A contest entry
- #4 Losing a loved one. by xox-lankan-xox.
500 points, ended March 13, 131 entries
Honorable mention
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Amazing poem! I really liked it!
Wow, this is amazing. It was so emotional and beautifully written, although sad at the same time. I really enjoyed reading this poem, and you have so much talent! I wish my poetry was as good as yours. I will definitely keep this poem in mind when deciding on the winners. Thanks so very much for entering this piece into my contest and good luck!
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This is a really sweet and warm poem. I liked it--it's simplicity and the message it gives, that death doesn't mean the end for the person you love and it doesn't mean that they will never be around again, but they'll be with you every day.
Great job
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I love it
beautiful, but still a little sad. Technically speaking, in all things spiritual, departed souls don't become angels. Those are sepparate beings all-together, though they co-exist in heaven. Finding a different word could make it more realistic. Well done though, and thank you for writing it.
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