Pixie Land
In the forest of Pixie Land
is where I romp and play
Laughing and giggling
at the silliest of things
I sometimes sit and sing songs
and read poetry that stir ones heart
The true beauty of what I say
is a true reflection of you whom I see
But what is this?
A noise I hear off in the distance
I stop and look
my heart starts to pound with such force
My mind plays tricks on me
but what could it be
Then I see you
by the stream
You picked a single flower
and listen to water rushing by you
You slowly raised your veil
and look at me
My heart stops once again
as I look into your eyes
You raise your finger to your lips
shhhhhhhhhh come here you whisper
I can only follow your
every wish
you ask me to sit
and I do right next to you
We sit for hours
without saying a word
You slowly put your wing around me
keeping me safe
The beauty of Pixie Land flows within my heart
I whisper it in a poem
You smile in your special way
and your eyes sparkle
but before we realize anything
lions, tigers, and so many other creatures
are sitting all around us
enjoying such beauty
Author notes
I was talking with Sonja the other day and we started to write this poem together.. I hope you enjoy it as it was alot of fun putting it together.
Written March 2nd, 2006
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Yes, of course you are a PIXIE! I am gathering this poem today and am putting it in my little poem pocket and I am taking it to Poetry Planet for all the world to enjoy! Lovely and makes me feel happy this day. It will do the same for other folks, too! Thank you for sharing. I am glad to know you!
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Thank you Trina. I am glad you like it. Ed is great poet and friend and it was my pecila pleasure to work in collaboration with him.
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This is beautiful. From your the words I read on your author page to the words in your poetry I am impressed. You too seem to be a beatiful, talented poet. Always, Trina.
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wonderful jon very mystical and satisfying to the reader thanks for sharing
micehle -
relaxing and happy poem to read be4 bedtime..almost like a
tale out of a story book.. thank you for sharing..and good luck in the contest..
Linda -
A delightful write of serenity and nature.I especially liked the sitting together in contentment without a word needing to be said.I wonder if the plural of stir had been considered by Sonja and yourself as in "stirs ones heart?"Lovely imagery and the naturalness of the animals appearing imbued this poem with a sense of being in a magical garden of eden,well done to you both,love and light,Yvette
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excellant work
THis was really good. I like it. I see alot of workmanship in this one. You did a beautiful job in making this a delightful reading. Thank you I enjoy it. -
Great Job
A sweet collaboration here, what a wonderful place pixie land must be, I am so glad to be a pixie! Wonderful job on this piece you two! You deserve smooshes galore!
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DEar ED and Sonya, this is beautiful, I loved reading this light hearted poem and I'm happy to be a Pixie too!
Hugs Joan
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As you love one Pixie, you love us all since we share the same heart as part of our divine chart from Glory be I see.
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`Bravo.
well done...... it makes u want to see what u've seen. Keep it up. Francine
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wow...you two are great at writing this nice piece.
Love you both,
Shahrzad
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A wonderful sharing, you two! Thank you so much for putting this together as it's very well done! Bravo!!
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