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4 Little words

Let
 me
  win
    please.

Author notes

Have a very mary krismas.

This is for a contest - so just go with it - PLEASE...  I WANT A TROPHY!!!!  :-)
Written March 2nd, 2006

A contest entry

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  • grannyeri gold member
    November 16, 2006
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    Fits the bill

    This is just what is asked for in the challenge for this contest. Four little words that say it just as it is! Can't get any better than this.


  • spamwitch
    April 12, 2006
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    lol, well I think you made your point..

  • DeHemelValt
    March 9, 2006
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    haha, we'll see. good luck!

  • Word--Warrior
    March 7, 2006
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    blunt

    LOL you lil bratt! ok, going with it...hmmm...well, it certainly is quite blunt and leaves lil to be desired as to your needs!


  • XxPlaStiCxHeaRtxX
    March 5, 2006
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    hehe. this is awesome!! I'd let you win!!


  • rannilt
    March 4, 2006
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    ahaaa! you deserve to win with this...so cute.


  • Empathy-eyes
    March 3, 2006
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    Hehe, nice one.


  • April Renee
    March 2, 2006
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    lol. good job. interesting, so simple - but i never would have come up with that. good luck in the contest.

    blu


  • Breaking The Girl
    March 2, 2006
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    lol niiiiice

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