Dripping with desire
Enslaved by unseen chains in
Floods of ecstasy
sarajane
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Written March 2nd, 2006
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floods of ecstasy
Hello there Sarajane.
This is an interesting take on haiku. Not very tradional at all. You are very expressive in your
choice of three cliches.
I kinda like it and kinda don't know what to say.
So I wont say anything else, except -
have a gr8 day,
BJ.
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Wow. This was really sensual, which I'm sure is the reason why you put it in the sensual list.
Haikus are so wonderful, but they're usually about nature - which makes this even more enjoyable. Good job.
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good poem
I like your poem it fits in well, no perfectly with the picture hard but deeply organic.
all the best
perdix
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Hi blackday, ty for reading and commenting, much appreciated. It's a picture of mineral deposits.
Glad you enjoyed, and ty for the applause. sj 
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Awesome
Wow. I love this 'ku. It's really great. And I must say, that picture is what got me. It looks like melted crayons or some type of candy.
Great write.
-Chase -
Ummm, is actually a picture of mineral deposits sj
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What the heck is that picture! I want to lick it but it might be painful lol an ice lolly melting pops to mind or some sort of fruit. Spill ink and twist me into the shape of love...
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tee hee! you know me tooo well!!!! hope you are doing ok
and ty for commenting!
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