the sky opens its gate
precious water find your way
people meet their fate
earth's arms are open and obey
water will gather to a pond
people quicken the pace and respond
dodging puddles to avoid predicted doom
but god's rain gives them no room
water drops on their shoes
liquid nutrition for some bad news
wet skin is no torture
when do people understand nature?
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Written March 2nd, 2006
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.:Timmy S. Edgar © 2007:.
This really cool bro i like the imagery and word usage -
thank you very much!
i know waht ur talking about.. i also tend to write sad stuff 
damn girls (sry =))
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Wow... Amazing piece... Good to see some positive writing. I try to keep something positive in, but lately ive been angry, and its time to put it into writing...
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This is a great poem i loved it and really enjoyed reading it you did a great job keep up the great work and thanks for sharing
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thanks a lot!
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That was very nice
Excellent rhyming.. I love the rain too!
Keep on writing.. -
exactly.. i love rain ^^ but a lot of people don't.. thanks for your comment!
Edited on Mar 02, 3:14 p.m. because ''.
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