you can shoot arrows out towards heaven's fireflies
i just can't be alone here tonight
so sweep me off my feet and carry me away
cause with you now is the only place i want to be
floating lost deep within your gaze
set my heart on fire and throw it with wings
yes, i'm that into you ...
let's run away into west coast lights
tug away at velvet soft rose pedals
then drop them into the sparkling ocean
drown in laughter and darkness into morning rises
watercolor rainbow set into blotchy clouds
another day, another sweet sweet memory
grass beneath my body. roll with me
cause with all these deep woodland sounds
i've never felt so alive
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Written March 2nd, 2006
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i am .... thanks Lau
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you seem happy in love... beautiful poem and so glad to see you here in such happy verse. Nicely done hun, really happy for you, you deserve the best
love and respect
Lau xxx -
thanks keir
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thanks
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beautiful...
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I haven't seemed to have read any of your poems in a long time, and it's great to see you post again!
Very sweet poem, and the opening line about "shooting arrows out towards heaven's fireflies" was a really great opening for the poem.
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thank you!
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ahhh love...it't thsoe first moments that mean everything....love really does make you feel alive...i really enjoyed this it was rather sweet
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