What is that, out in the sea
A vision, oh yes, just you and me
I close my eyes and shield the truth
That we will never again be
Leave me to my hopes and dreams
Drowning out my hollow screams
I miss you oh so very much
Time is withering my fragile seams
What is that, up in the sky
A love in which shall never die
Wishing on another shooting star
Needing to bind you in one more lie
Standing in the rain at night
I remember all of the foolish fight
Lost in a battle with no surrender
Bound in a hole with no sunlight
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love sucks
Written March 2nd, 2006
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I liked the 1st 2nd 4th rhyme format. The last line doesn't seem quite right, although I am at a loss to offer an alternative. Overall it is a good poem, very expressive. -
This is a really good poem....and i agree with you love does suck...but anyways great poem the whole thig rhymed really well....Great Job
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