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shotgun shell Christmas lights and you're my comfort zone

and i meant it when i said to you
that it was the best feeling in the world
... falling asleep in your arms
knowing as i close my eyes that
when they opened you'd still be there
holding me. loving me. never leaving me.
the late February air was cold on my face
but i could of gazed at the stars for eternity
anything to keep you near me
smoke from my lungs as i smile
you always know how to get me
your hands in my hair as i sigh
lips meeting again and i ...
i can't stop shaking around you
are the shivers from your touch, your breath
or just the pure satisfaction that
you're in love with me.
you've come to be my strength, sweetheart
with your red truck and green eyes
sunflowers in the summertime
and i just can't wait - -
to see how far we can take this
(cause i don't ever want it to end)

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Written March 2nd, 2006

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  • StrandsInYourEyes
    March 2, 2006
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    thanks so much


  • this is all i am
    March 2, 2006
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    i love it. suck passion and pure care, you can see past all the words to the thoughts about the person here in the poem, you did a great job, thanks so much for sharing
    your friend
    emily