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Face


 
  
   Seeming alone in this circle of hate,
     feeling stuck in a fistfull of fate.

   Looking around, i'm always late,
     Waiting to come in, i'm outside the gate.

   These tears are my own,
      for saddness is all I have known.

   These thorns in my eyes,
       bring the blood back to your lies.

   So let us end it now,
      so we will feel the lines of the sound.
   

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Written March 2nd, 2006

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  • dustookie2
    March 15, 2006
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    good one

    had to come and look for more...like what i am reading. thank you. has a nice flow to this one and i must admit a short poem is good as is the dark ones...nicely done