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the broken child

Do you see the broken child
kneeling before you?

Do you see the tears
streaming down her angelic face?

Do you hear her piercing cries
as she finally lets go of her soul?

Do you know the pain she feels,
and does it burn within your soul?

Do you see her...

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Written March 2nd, 2006

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  • MyOwnDownfall
    March 22, 2006
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    i always have... and i always will