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Can i capture that look in you eye,

Can I capture that look in your eye,
Envelope it to feed me when I cry,
Your scent of perfection like chocolate in Lent,
You soothe a lullaby,
And snow melts,
Flowers bloom,
Ivy looses grip,
Forests sigh,
Wind is short of breath,
Shadows detach and drift,
A crow swallows silence and prays
it in a thousand harmonies,
RED, GREEN and BLUE fights to surround you,

And all I can condure... is a smile.

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Anyone got any ideas for a name?
Written March 2nd, 2006

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  • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
    March 2, 2006
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    And all I can condure... is a smile.
    this i s so awesome. i think you have the perfect name. sometimes the name doesn't need to be a name. it can be what you have, what you are, what you say. viyanna r langager