I tried to see me last night
I tried to see me through my mirror
I found a shadow of me
I found its reflecting something else not me
That was something different
That was what the mirror saw
I learned that mirrors have there own eyes
I tried to see through the eyes of a dove
I tried to see my mind and my nurve
as i failed to do so in past
Now i can take the help of my mirror at last
A mirror can show you whatever it has seen in life
A mirror can tell you whatever it heared in life
A mirror can be your best friend if you find
the way to communicate with it
Author notes
Written March 2nd, 2006
A contest entry
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very good write and i wish you good luck
thanks for joinging my contest
its a point forwarding contest
whoever get the gold trophy please open the same contest
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bah re bah
i really like this
like a baby like chocolate
I tried to see me last night
I tried to see me through my mirror
I found a shadow of me
I found its reflecting something else not me
That was something different
That was what the mirror saw
I learned that mirrors have there own eyes
I tried to see through the eyes of a dove
I tried to see my mind and my nurve
as i failed to do so in past
Now i can take the help of my mirror at last
A mirror can show you whatever it has seen in life
A mirror can tell you whatever it heared in life
A mirror can be your best friend if you find
the way to communicate with it
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man what you have done?
you have made a great poem
please keep it up
i am so happy reading this
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using a mirror is teh clearest medifore sometimes for what you go through. i love how you used that in this piece! you clearly show the images we see can be distorted, regardless of what they actually may be. great write. good luck!!
~Jaymy -
deep
i loike this poem it's very deep and i appluad just i have to appluad tomorrow when i can appluad it
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