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1 Boy, 1 Girl

He played with just one toy,
Just that one boy,
Looking up in his bedroom window,
He looked at the floor and looked below,

"Please God, I know im your angel,
But could you take her to your special place,"

Waitin by the tree on the hill,
In his pocket there is a two dollar bill,
And a tiny locket,
Waiting on his one true love,
When she smiles, she smiles from above,

Watching her walk his way,
He had dreamed about his every day,

She walked up to him and said,
"I turned eight today, But I only
Wished for my daddy to come home,
It's already five o'clock"

Her eyes shined with the sun,
Her hair flowed with the wind,

"I dont think he will be here,
Any time soon, to get me."

He reached in his pocket,
Pulled out a tiny locket,
Placed it in her hands,
and said,

"Dont worry I will take care of you,
Come on,"

He took her hand,
And lead the way,
But he stopped to say,

"Lets go home,"

Author notes

its like the little girl is getting beat and stuff. and the little boy is the angel that saves her and watches over her. Cause he likes her and thinks its love. And he meets her and takes her home with him and god to live forever.
Written March 1st, 2006

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  • Dark-Lady
    March 2, 2006
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    awww so cute just like your brother lol love ya girl great one byezzzzzzzzzz tell tonya thanks lots i saw my screen and was like whoa who is this lol

  • Darkbabe
    March 1, 2006
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    sorry i told my brother to write that for me but yea i relized that after i wrote it that.


  • PassionOfAnAngel
    March 1, 2006
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    I agree with Speak from you heart, I love it!!! keep up the awsone work.

  • SPeaK fRoM uR HeArt
    March 1, 2006
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    awesome

    This reminds me of the song concrete angel by martina mcbride..I like it