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me and the moon

i followed the moon,
or perhaps the moon followed me.
but soon we walked hand in hand
for the world to see.

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but soon we walked hand in hand
for the world to see.
Written March 1st, 2006

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  • leander Moderators member
    March 17, 2006
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    I very short poem that really speaks to the mind of the reader... you have something here that can be considered as food for thoughts big time, and I love the imagery there's inside great job!

  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    March 1, 2006
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    Short and sweet, I like this write very much, and love the moon Josephine.