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your hollywood

we found the california in our minds, and drove there without a second thought. the breeze caught our hair and tied it into knots. the lights of the city burned our eyes, and led us in the wrongly right direction. we lost all sense of right and wrong, and i became your hollywood.

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Written March 1st, 2006

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  • RottenXHeartX
    March 14, 2007

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    This is great, i love it.
    'The wrongly right direction' well put
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  • leander Moderators member
    March 17, 2006
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    I really like the metaphors you've managed to capture within the lines of this poem very well written in fact the only suggestion I'd make is to put it into stanza's instead of this one big paragraph... thank you for sharing and welcome to the site!