* Purr,
purr, purr, purr,
purr. Precious 'lil kitten,
you have the softest fur, I will enjoy it
most when you listen. To love you is my
pleasure, when you sit upon my lap. And
you may sleep on me, when you want to
take a nap. Your life is in my hands now, and
I promise to be true. Food and fresh water everyday.
I'll take good care of you. My pledge
of love is honest. It's a promise
that I'll keep. You are to me the fondest, and my
heart will take a leap. Balls & mouses filled
with catnip; with these you may play.
All I ask as the milk you sip, is with
me you'll want to stay.
I'll buy you a collar
to wear around your neck, "You are mine" is what
it will say. To spend my last dollar, if you needed
it, I would pay. I want to pet you often, because you
are soft to touch. So please don't bite or scratch me,
because I love you so much. Meow! Meow! Meow! Meow!
Author notes
Yep!! Give me an inch and I'll give you a figural!!
Written March 1st, 2006
A contest entry
- Needed - Children's Writers 2 by StormGoddess.
400 points, ended October 20, 2006, 21 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Tang, you already know I love your figurals and a kitten definitely strikes the interest of little childen. Written that this little kitten may become their best friend. Thank you so much for entering this project.
Storm -
Dear DarkenedDreams,
Thanks so much for your compliment. The figural poems are my favorite to create!
Tang -
I think that this is a sweet poem it is so cute I never thought of doing a poem like what you did. one of the poems in my contest talking about writing about an animal and you made a pic out of it. I really love how you did it. now it makes me want to write a poem about an animal or something like that. Good luck in my contest. if you want to add another poem you can. the limit is 2 per person.
DarkenedDreams -
OL-9.5
cute one! Really loved this sweet poem! I love the shape..its so realastic..I love it! its so original and perfect ! Just loved it! looovvveeddd it! U got the idea ??
thanks for entering and good luck in my contest! Do not forget to check the origanality level ( OL ) In the verdict box! Its outta 10!
preets
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This one I actually worked over the figural! I wasn't happy with the first! So more time than you could imagine!
I hope you aren't so quick with the ladies!
Tang
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Brilliant incarnation of the face.No wonder you won gold with this.Well done!I would like to know exactly how much time did this take?
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Dear supergirl45817,
Thank you so much! I just love to do the figural poetry. I takes some tweeking but I like the end result.
Tang -
This is so good! How did you do te shape? IT's awesome!
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww ! this is soooooooooooooooooo wonderful ! the shape given was just outstanding ! thank you very muvh for this wonderful entry and best wishes in the contest !
yours
TRUTHWRITER -
PUUURRRFFFEECCCCT!!!!!!!!!Cute kitty sitting on a knee
Won't you come and play with me
Lovely poem, Ros -
Excellent
awwwwwwww, so sweet! I just love cats and kittens. I have 7 older kittens and 1 grown cat. They live in their outside cat house. Your writing is just great and your feelings come out in your work. Thank you for the excellent read. Brightest Blessings! Oh! Thankyou for the nice comment on my work. -
Thank you ladies,
Somehow it just puuurrrrd right onto the computer. I'm enjoying the shaped poetry. Glad you are too!! -
Haha I love how you wrote this it is very very creative.
Great job. -
It's a shape of a kitten. Very clever. Nicely writte, my love.
~Camisha -
{loves kittens}
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Thank you Stardust-luvr,
I am finding my niche with the figurals (getting a collection) -
Purrrrrrrrrrrrrrrfect
You are very good at what you do!!
I wish you luck in all your writings. Keep up the awesome work and keep writing from your heart as deep from your heart your figural works show.
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Dear Donna,
Thanks for your purrrfect comment!!
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Indeed, Great Stuff! This is a wonderfully purrrrfect shape poem. LOL! Good luck in the contest.
~Donna~ -
Thanks, I'm glad the kitten showed up okay!! I am enjoying myself.
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Great
I loved this wonderful shape poem. I could see the kitten right enough. Your comments made me laugh. Great stuff.
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