My trust once lost is forever gone,
congratulations, you've just lost it.
Your lies and broken promises are done,
and in my mind there's no doubt,
you don't and could never have cared.
'Always here for you' you promised.
'Nothing will change' you swore.
Where are you now, my 'friend'?
When the tears fall and I hit the floor,
your back is all I see. Shows how you care.
Sometimes I regret trusting in you,
I should have listened to my head, not heart.
I’m sure deep down I always knew
you’d leave me here, ripped apart.
You could never truly care.
My trust once lost is forever gone,
congratulations, you've lost it.
If you want a chance to get it back,
prove to me you really do care.
Convince me you always have...
...Before it really is too late.
Author notes
Just added the verse 'Sometimes I regret...', tell me what you think.
Obviously this is about two people who I really thought I could trust. One seems to have completely turned his back on me, the other still tries to help, but after what she said to me I can't trust her like I used to. One will read this (you know who you are), the other won't.
Thanks to everyone who listened to me, especially Smoth, Huw, Liz, Abbie and Jess who've been amazing at cheering me up and taking my mind off things 
Written March 1st, 2006
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yay a rhymey one
ti sawesome nice one, my random phone friend!! 
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wow thats a powerful poem, filled with true emotions... very deep and touching... keep up the good work...
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hey saz...veeerrrrry good poem despite you being so unsure of it over msn... as all these people before me have commented so, apart from that alsy person...he/she can go eat a smurff!!! coz i liked it. easy to relate to. sorry alsy person... whoever you are..... weather you read this is probably not likely.... shall i stop now?
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Awww Sarah. I love this, really good stuff. I didn't even realise it had rhyming until the comment mentioned it, had to go back and look, which probably means the rhyming is good enough that it's not noticeably forced, so well done indeedy. ~ Osarkon
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whoop! whoop! Sarah I Love You! This poem is brilliant but sad cause it's personal
and if they don't get the picture their a couple of dumb-nut-losses!! xxxxx
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i like the rhyming but I didn't really like the poem, I like your meaning
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