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On The Wire

I'm on the wire.
There's empty space to fall
A narrow path to walk
Two directions,
I'll have to choose

I'm on the wire.
My sin's outweighed my good
And up here I'm alone
Nothing else,
So who can I blame?

I'm on the wire.
Can't find my white marker pen
Can't colour the black in white
Too much darkness, too little light
So as they say,
I'm on the wire.

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Written March 1st, 2006

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  • Humma Shiemo
    March 14, 2006
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    Mohst excellent, dude. ^-^ 'Felicitations!' as Mrs Eroglu would say.