Green grassy knolls and lustrous leas,
foxy lady I aim to please.
Become spellbound with your first glance,
captivating hypnotic trance.
Forbidden lovers now they meet,
gentle touch to make love complete.
Lost deep within his chestnut eyes,
magic moment to hypnotize.
Innocence of white and pure,
lost forever, will not endure.
First time pleasure about to start,
so shy she gives her captured heart.
Submitting to her love so true,
passion's doorstep, feeling anew.
Love shared in the meadow that day,
as his eyes stole her heart away.
One last kiss and warm embrace
a gentle touch upon her face.
Blinded by love, she could not see,
forbidden love can never be.
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Written March 1st, 2006
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so much can be said for the innocense of first time loves entwinements.......innocent feelings of love derived for the very first time.....forbidden?.......could be left to my own thoughts to conclude......the ebb and flow of this beatufiul writings sings to me......leaving me with a touch of its magic....and a desire for a loss of a innocense.....I would find all over again......finding myself with new love....beautifully expressed and rhymed...songfully
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Malabu -
Exquisite! This is a true gem of a piece you've done here. Stunning imagery and it speaks to the heart and soul, holding you captive the whole way through. Truly an outstanding write! Blessings, Gypsy
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I definitely enjoyed the feeling and delivernece of your poem. The warnth was soaking in it's intensity and word play magical, I guess I just did not take the same emotion from the picture it was based upon. Excellent work all the same.
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This is terrific - great writing and excellent wording and rhyme. Loved it!
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Love it.She really is a Foxy Lady, Ros
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WONDERFUL POEM
Thank you Julie for the lovely comment. I do appreciate it.Take care, Sandy
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Oh..Sandy..this is just a wonderful poem and a very cute picture. You really evoked a romantic feeling within the lovely flow of this well crafted write.
I think you should do more love poems....
LIZ -
This is such a dreamy and romantic write (ahhhhhhh.....). You have such a talent for making rhyme work for you - it flows so naturally and in such an unforced manner. I love the pic that you used for this too, it really fits your poem well. Was your poem inspired by the pic? or did you just happen to find the perfect picture for this wonderful poem? (Just curious). Anyways, I really enjoyed this poem and wish you tons of success in the contest!
James
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An excellent write. Well done. I enjoyed reading this. The imagery is wonderful, as is the style it is written in.
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I enjoyed this and the presentation well done
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WOW, such an awesome written poem that tells the story well of the picture. Great job.
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Awesome
Awesome! Forbidden love is the best kind. I love the visual, and the descriptions were perfect as you penned them. You have talent, and it shows that you reached into your soul for this one. -
Very well done
LOVE IT!!!!! All of it, the picture and all. If I had to choose yours would one of the trophy winners, or if not a trophy at least high honorable meantion! Brovo, well done. -
Ohmigod, that is like one of the best poems I read so far. it's so romantic, I love it. Keep up the good work
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I love this piece, so beautifully written. I love the picture too. The flow is perfect. Excellent job
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WONDERFUL COMMENT
Ah thank you for the nice comment Michael. I do enjoy writing them lately. I usually write with my emotions. I never know what is going to come out till it is done. Inspiration always helps too. Thanks again. God Bless you. Sandy
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Excellent
Where have you been hiding this inate talent for love poems. I love it. Keep up the great writes and good luck in the contest. Take care.
Michael -
nice job I enjoyed it! the title is the same as a Jimi Hendrix song thats what got me hook on to it!
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Very nicely done, my friend! I wish you the best of luck in the contest!
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brilliant flow, very passionate.
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Brilliant piece of work.
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bravo
Oh wow, this is great, I love it very much, makes me nostalgic for those kind of feelings, and the picture is great too, well done!! -
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Ouch! What a fantastic picture! How could I not read the words? And as I read them, I too was transformed into a hypnotic trance-I'm just lovin' this fantasy-thanx for the wonder-filled journey!
peace & blessings...
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Woh, mom, dont be going after a fox!!! or a female, wow, lol this was a good wright, secret love, wow thats like a blowtorch for a baby, and you know that, This was an awesome write, and I think you did awesome on this piece I loved it.
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foxy! lol this was very deep and passionate. loved it! great write and thanks for sharing. keep up the great work
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Wow! How passionate!
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