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He who cannot be forgotten.


  Burning deep inside legendary stone,
   lives the greatest sword we've ever known.

  An eternal blazing flame,
    unleashed within, a fury no evil can claim.

  Who will win such fame?
    But the person who once had no name.

  Like dark and cold steel,
    through his eyes, even the dead can feel.

  To touch you with the blade,
    you are apart of something that can never fade.


  
 

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Written March 1st, 2006

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  • bludstaindsoliloquy
    March 1, 2006
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    Well done! Good imagery . . . veri strong subject matter . . . and veri strong . . . consistant presentation! Brilliant write! Keep penning . . . and please . . . keep sharing!

    Maggie