Where are the thoughts in my head,
the silence of the meaning that makes me go to bed?
Its in my head, its in my head,
yes that's what I said.
Surely surely, the things inside must die,
just never think about it or even begin to cry.
Now take this note,
and read to me what I wrote.
Thank you very much,
Now I know what its like to feel your wonderful touch.
Come again, come again,
so we can pretend.
Another life another day,
just don't forget how to play!
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Written March 1st, 2006
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I loved this and I have to agree there are alot of deep undertones to this poem. but it is great. I reallu loved this full of emotion. Great job
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Very cute poem. I like the way this was made! Ver well written! -
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This was composed beautifully, it was like reading between the lines of wisdom, the feelings were deep and emotional , you didi an great job on thid piece of work, your talent shows.
Write ON!>>>>>>>>Ennovy -
cool stuff!!i really didn't get it but i really loved the flow and the rhyming!!!great job!!!keep going!!!!great stuff!!!
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Pretty deep thoughts and feelings in these lines, and more hidden between the spaces - how tragic that one feels this way - good write.
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Awwww! Very nice!!!
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that is cute. you wrote it well and the flow, rhythm makes it catchy. thank you for sharing this with me today. viyanna r langager
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