You are so soft and comfy
You lie so innocent on my bed
The tv is running but I just wanna watch you instead
sometimes you are really dirty
I wash you gently with my hands
Your flavour is like a state of trance
When I'm sad you catch my tears
You let me forget all my fears
And you listen to my issues
and you always have tissues
I pet you on your tender spot
I know that you get really hot
Oh, what would I do without you?
I don't know, I have no clue
It started the day we first met
Since then no reget
You will be always as gentle as a dove
You are my cushion that love
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Written March 1st, 2006
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thank you very much!
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enjoyable
nice to read a "light' poem once in while. Cute -
a very good poem! You write very well and the rhymes just flow so beautifully! Well done
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wow, that is really an honour for me that it pleased you so much.. ill keep on writing ^^ that's for sure
I've you want more then read my other poems..
thanks for you comment.. made my day!!! -
WOW i really really loved this poem you did such a great job on this poem its one of the best poems iv ever read you did a great job keep up the great work and thanks for sharing.
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It is really a great and very pleasant write revealing the strength of the love and also the beauty of this most beautiful sentiment of this universe that is the'LOVE'.The thoughts are here vey melodious and very musical with reference to joy of life through the presence of love..
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thank you very much! yes, it would work for a friend but it also work for just for a cushion...
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Great!
I really like this poem, it is something like I would write to my boyfriend. I love him so much and he is always there to listen to my problems. He is wonderful to me. I love this poem. I think that true feelings are showed thru these poems. Good write, I hope to read more. Have a great day! -
If you want to go right ahead i would love it.
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shall I?
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This is really sweet god i wish someone would write something like this to me.
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