Love is what I feel for you
I have no doubt that it is true
From my first glimpse to our first kiss
That started off our life of bliss
You showed me that love was real
Proved that my heart could heal
Because I met you my One True Love
You who was sent to me from Above
We were custom made for each other
Never meant to be with another
My heart once broken is now healed
The rest of my future now revealed
Not just mine but ours together
From now until forever
Think of what our future will bring
The things of which the stars all sing
First house, first car, first everything
All due to the giving of a wedding ring
Our first beautiful baby laid in our arms
We will become quickly lost to her charms
And each baby after we'll lose our hearts the same
And each of them will have your last name
We will watch them grow
And later see their hearts flow
As our did all those years ago
Author notes
idk how good it is but it came from the heart
Written February 28th, 2006
A contest entry
- somebody from you (favorite poets only) by jkh.
300 points, ended March 6, 2006, 7 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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I love how we've already decided our first baby will be a girl (though it may not be) and how youve incorporated it into this poem. Great write.
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Joshua thanks for saying it was beautiful and i already told you what i ment to me and if this was any other contest i would not have entered this poem cause its so special between the two of us. Love you for Always.
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwww sooo sweet... great poem.
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Wow. This is so beautiful. Itll be hard to beat this one for sure. I really love the imagery and the personal touches. I also like how you brought it back in circle to you origional thought. Thank you for entering.
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