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My Affirmation

"*Today is the first day of the rest of our lives together*"


Once told, Twice heard, our love grows stronger.
  Three times by the mouth, Four times to the ear,
     our bond is unbreakable my dear.
A mind of Five connecting to Six heart beats, we will soon be one again.
   Seven spirits leaping into Eight souls, God's love
        grows within us.
            Nine memories turns into Ten visions, soul       mates we truly are.


Yvonne J. Griffin
2/28/06

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Written February 28th, 2006

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  • pozo
    March 1, 2006
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    I liked the way you used numbers here Keep writing, this was a very romantic poem which I liked a lot
    All the best
    Thanks for your comment
    Pozo


  • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
    February 28, 2006
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    this is so awesome. you wrote this well. may i ask why the break
    Nine memories turns into Ten visions, soul mates we truly are
    in soul mates?

    that has me a bit perplexed. viyanna r langager